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PostSubject: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Mon 28 Jul - 1:14

This is a story i'm writing


Godzilla VS
Crystalon


Prolog
A boat splashes in the waves of Lake Michigan. There are four people in it one small 12 year old, one 15 year old and 2 adults. The teenager sees a twinkling in the sky.

Teen: Hay dad look at the sky.

The dad looks thinks for a minute then

Adult 1: OMG

The meteorite goes right over head and into the horizon towards Japan.
as the meteor heads toward it target it crosses the Day/Night barrier.
Alarms sound as it heads for a small town itís suppose to impact in is evacuated (small town) as it heads toward point of impact a Nuclear beam hitís it disintegrating it white shards of crystal rain down on the town.
Godzilla roars, turns around and swims toward his home and his son



Ch 1
We start this chapter in a house a guy is laying in bed with the sheets over his head. His alarm colck next to his bed goes off . He hitís the alarm turning it off and sits up getís out of bed (he is wearing close)). He goes to his bathroom and combs his hair and brushes his teeth. He then sitís down at his Computer. He turns it on a picture of Godzilla is his wall paper. He opens up a web site called [url=http://www.GodzillaSerchers.com]WWW.GodzillaSerchers.com[/url] (not a real site). He yawns one member. He then opens up his e-mail. He has 3 messages the first one is labeled Your fired, the second is labeled Weíre thru, The last one is labeled Would youÖ he deletes the first two and opens the last one it gose

Dear Jeff Gray

We need your help contact us at *phone number*


From G-Hunters

Sent August 9th 2013 at 2:16 Am

Jeff: What the hell

Jeff picks up his phone and calls numbers

Japanese woman: Hello

Jeff: Hello ? You sent me an E-mail

Japanese woman: yes, you must be Jeff

Jeff: I just might be

Japanese woman: Very funny well as you probably know Godzilla destroyed a a meteor just before it hit a Japanese village.

Jeff: WHAT!!

JW: You mean you donít know


Jeff grabs remote and turns to new Headline: Godzilla destroys meteor for unknown reasons

Jeff: Wow thatís new

JW: let us just cut to the chases we want you to come to Japan to assist us in finding out why we also need you to identify the crystals that feel from the sky

Jeff: canít you do that your selfs

JW: none of us have any experience with this kind of Crystal

Jeff: I donít have the means to get to Japan

JW: leave that to us

Jeff: OkayÖ
JW: meet one of our members at the nearest airport

Jeff: who is it

JW: His name is Izanagi He will meet you there in 5 hours

Jeff: OK

He goes to his room grabs a suit case and puts some close in it and getís on his bike and heads toward the air port (a 4 Ĺ hour bike ride)

Ch 2

Finally at the Air port he sits in the waiting room and falls asleep only to be woken up 45 minutes later by Izanagi

Izanagi: excuse me but are you Jeff Gray

Jeff: Yes who are you

Izanagi: Iím Izanagi, Ayaka sent me to meat you here so I could bring you to Tokyo

Jeff: thanks I OU one Izanagi

Izanagi: No problem hereís your ticket letís go the filght takes off in 10 min

Jeff: Letís go

Ch 3
On the plane now midway in filght

Jeff: so why dose the Japanese government need me to help

Izanagi: we needed the Best crystallography we could find and plus you ďaffection for GodzillaĒ

Jeff: flattered
Izanagi: you should be Prime Minister Hisashi asked for you personally

Jeff: Prime Minister Hisashi was a friend and the other member of my site till he Ďcame Prime Minister of Japan then he stopped talking to me.

Izanagi: I am sorry

Jeff: itís okay

Izanagi: you sure

Jeff: yes

Ch 4
TBA


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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Mon 28 Jul - 5:17

Not bad.
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Mon 28 Jul - 6:55

you should see my conserpt art for Crystalon (don't know how to use URL so i can't post it) i'll post more The day after tommorow
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Fri 1 Aug - 7:34

Srry it's late

Ch 4

*Several hours later the plane lands in Tokyo.*

Izanagi: JeffÖ wake up.

Jeff: hunÖ what (said Drowsily)

Izanagi: weĎre here.

Jeff: We are?

Izanagi: We are. The Prime minister is waiting for us

Jeff: GreatÖ

*They get off the plane meet by three people Prime Minister Hisashi , Ayaka, and a Japanese man named Kurisu*

Hisashi: Jeff how have you been

Jeff: well my Girlfriend just broke up with me and I just got fired from my job so Iíd say pretty $**tty plus the fact I get to meet my back stabbing friend again

Hisashi: Look I didnít want you to come here but youíre the only Crystallologist that isnít in the field right now

Jeff: Letís get something strait I need to be paid as soon as I find out what this is

Hisashi: We will pay you accordingly now if you will excuse me I have duties to attend to. You will be working with Ayaka, Kurisu, and Izanagi who I believe you know

Jeff: Yes


Hisashi: fine get it done and get out of here

* Hisashi leaves*

Jeff: Good riddens now letís go get this done

Kurisu: *grabís Jeff buy the collar* Letís get something stait we donít work for you. you work for us.

Ayaka: let the man go he just wants to get going

Kurisu: *whispers in Jeff ear* Sheís mine *lets go*

CH 4 Ĺ

*underneath the sea we see Godzilla swimming past a group of blue wails toward a land mass (Japan).

Ch 5

*in G-Hunters Head quarters*

Jeff: so Izanagi what kind of tools do the G-Hunters have.
Izanagi: Only the best

Ayaka: yes the government provides almost anything we need

Jeff: What ever happed to G-Force

Ayaka: They where disbanded after Godzilla destroyed Deystroyah and melted down

Jeff: Didnít Godzilla Jr. Survive

Izanagi: Yes but he didnít show the same tendencies to destroy Japan as his father so Hisashi had them disbanded to save money

Ayaka: Then in 2003 Godzilla Jr attacked Hokkaido so they made a new force called G-Hunter

Izanagi: We donít want to destroy him like the G-Force but to understand him
Jeff: to help prevent casualties

Kurisu: Yah and we all live happily ever after pst yah right. He should be Destroyed like the monster he is

*they reach the room with the Crystals*

Kurisu: thereís your lab get started *walks away*

CH 6

TBA


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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Fri 8 Aug - 22:46

not bad m8 cheers cheers

a suggestion for a future story: ever since I saw Cloverfield (affraid affraid affraid) i've been thinking about a story of Godzilla Vs Clover, but i would have no idea how to go about writing it...

at any rate, your story looks pretty cool. keep up the good work!
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Fri 8 Aug - 22:57

yah cloverfield is the best monster since Godzilla and i might do that after Godzilla vs The Creture
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Fri 8 Aug - 23:02

never seen cloverfeild.
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Fri 8 Aug - 23:56

I have it now but I never watched it.
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Sun 10 Aug - 8:04

Consept art time





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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Sun 10 Aug - 21:43

Did you draw that???
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Mon 11 Aug - 6:52

yes
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Wed 13 Aug - 22:51

fairly god drawing, but ive seen better. overall a good fanfic, but you forget punctuation and dont add enough emotion for my tastes.
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Thu 14 Aug - 1:12

it's a work in progress and I know there are better drawings out there...
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Thu 14 Aug - 21:34

its good, dont get me wrong. i just think you could improve it a bit. as for drawings, you might want to get someone REALLY good at art to do them for you. yours is good but ive seen amazing art before for fanfics, and many of the fanfic authors get artists to draw for them.
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PostSubject: Re: Godzilla Vs Crystalon   Sat 11 Oct - 6:13

as far as agentaa is conserned Godzilla i drew a year ago and the Crystal people i drew in 15 min

any way minoir edit and new chapter

Godzilla VS Crystalon

Prolog
A boat splashes in the waves of Lake Michigan. There are four people in it one small 12 year old, one 15 year old and 2 adults. The teenager sees a twinkling in the sky.

Teen: Hay dad look at the sky.

The dad looks thinks for a minute then

Adult 1: OMG

The meteorite goes right over head and into the horizon towards Japan.
as the meteor heads toward it target it crosses the Day/Night barrier.
Alarms sound as it heads for a small town itís suppose to impact in is evacuated (small town) as it heads toward point of impact a Nuclear beam hitís it disintegrating it white shards of crystal rain down on the town.

Godzilla roars, turns around and swims toward his home and his son




Ch 1

We start this chapter in a house a guy is laying in bed with the sheets over his head. His alarm clock next to his bed goes off . He hitís the alarm turning it off and sits up getís out of bed (he is wearing close). He goes to his bathroom and combs his hair and brushes his teeth. He then sitís down at his Computer. He turns it on a picture of Godzilla is his wall paper. He opens up a web site called WWW.GodzillaSerchers.com (not a real site). He yawns 10 visits. He then opens up his e-mail. He has 3 messages the first one is labeled Your fired, the second is labeled Weíre thru, The last one is labeled Would youÖ he deletes the first two and opens the last one it goes

Dear Jeff Gray

We need your help contact us at *phone number*

From G-Hunters
Sent August 9th 2013 at 2:16 Am


Jeff: What the hell

Jeff picks up his phone and calls numbers

Japanese woman: Hello

Jeff: Hello ? You sent me an E-mail

Japanese woman: yes, you must be Jeff

Jeff: I just might be

Japanese woman: Very funny well as you probably know Godzilla destroyed a a meteor just before it hit a Japanese village.

Jeff: WHAT!!

JW: You mean you donít know

Jeff grabs remote and turns to new Headline: Godzilla destroys meteor for unknown reasons

Jeff: Wow thatís new

JW: let us just cut to the chases we want you to come to Japan to assist us in finding out why we also need you to identify the crystals that feel from the sky

Jeff: canít you do that your selfís

JW: none of us have any experience with this kind of Crystal

Jeff: I donít have the means to get to Japan

JW: leave that to us

Jeff: OkayÖ

JW: meet one of our members at the nearest airport

Jeff: who is it

JW: His name is Izanagi He will meet you there in 5 hours

Jeff: OK

He goes to his room grabs a suit case and puts some close in it and getís on his bike and heads toward the air port (a 4 Ĺ hour bike ride)

Ch 2

Finally at the Air port he sits in the waiting room and falls asleep only to be woken up 45 minutes later by Izanagi

Izanagi: excuse me but are you Jeff Gray

Jeff: Yes who are you

Izanagi: Iím Izanagi, Ayaka sent me to meat you here so I could bring you to Tokyo

Jeff: thanks I OU one Izanagi

Izanagi: No problem hereís your ticket letís go the flight takes off in 10 min

Jeff: Letís go

Ch 3

On the plane now midway in flight

Jeff: so why dose the Japanese government need me to help

Izanagi: we needed the Best crystallologist we could find and plus you ďaffection for GodzillaĒ

Jeff: flattered

Izanagi: you should be Prime Minister Hisashi asked for you personally

Jeff: Prime Minister Hisashi was a friend and help maintain my site till he Ďcame Prime Minister of Japan then he stopped talking to me.

Izanagi: I am sorry

Jeff: itís okay

Izanagi: you sure.

Jeff: yes Ö

Ch 4

*Several hours later the plane lands in Tokyo.*

Izanagi: JeffÖ wake up.

Jeff: huÖ what (said Drowsily)

Izanagi: weĎre here.

Jeff: We are?

Izanagi: We are. The Prime minister is waiting for us

Jeff: GreatÖ

*They get off the plane meet by three people Prime Minister Hisashi , Ayaka, and a Japanese man named Kurisu*

Hisashi: Jeff how have you been

Jeff: well my Girlfriend just broke up with me and I just got fired from my job so Iíd say pretty $**tty plus the fact I get to meet my back stabbing friend again

Hisashi: Look I didnít want you to come here but youíre the only Crystallologist that isnít in the field right now

Jeff: Letís get something strait I need to be paid as soon as I find out what this is

Hisashi: We will pay you accordingly now if you will excuse me I have duties to attend to. You will be working with Ayaka, Kurisu, and Izanagi who I believe you know

Jeff: Yes

Hisashi: fine get it done and get out of here

* Hisashi leaves*

Jeff: Good riddens now letís go get this done

Kurisu: *grabís Jeff buy the collar* Letís get something stait we donít work for you. you work for us.

Ayaka: let the man go he just wants to get going

Kurisu: *whispers in Jeff ear* Sheís mine *lets go*

CH 4 Ĺ

underneath the sea we see Godzilla swimming past a group of blue wails toward a land mass (Japan).

Ch 5

*in G-Hunters Head quarters*

Jeff: so Izanagi what kind of tools do the G-Hunters have.

Izanagi: Only the best

Ayaka: yes the government provides almost anything we need

Jeff: What ever happed to G-Force

Ayaka: They where disbanded after Godzilla destroyed Deystroyah and melted down

Jeff: Didnít Godzilla Jr. Survive

Izanagi: Yes but he didnít show the same tendencies to destroy Japan as his father so Hisashi had them disbanded to save money

Ayaka: Then in 2003 Godzilla Jr attacked Hokkaido so they made a new force called G-Hunter

Izanagi: We donít want to destroy him like the G-Force but to understand him

Jeff: to help prevent casualties?

Kurisu: Yah and we all live happily ever after pst yah right. He should be Destroyed like the monster he is

*they reach the room with the Crystals*

Kurisu: thereís your lab get started *walks away*

CH 6

Jeff: *Looks at Ayaka* Look at this Ayaka

Ayaka: What?

Jeff: the crystalsí structure is like salt

Ayaka: so it shatters in cubes
Jeff: yes but itís stronger than diamond

Ayaka: Thatís odd

Jeff: no kidding this could be the biggest discovery since oil

Ayaka: you know that you are a lot different than I though you would be when I was talking to you on the phone

Jeff: I tend to do that with people. *looks back at in the microscope* What did you think I would be like.

Ayaka: A slacker.

Jeff: Oh

Ayaka: but you are far more attendant to your work than I thought

Jeff: *Looks back at Ayaka* Let me tell you something 2 years ago when Jr. (Godzilla Jr. is referred to as Jr.) attacked Boston I volunteered to help rebuild just so I could learn more about Jr. Then when I went back to my home I started a web information page with The prime minister. I have logged on every day since then, he hasnít.

Ayaka: so that must haveÖ

Jeff: what the hell just happened?\

Ayaka: what happened

Jeff: the crystal is pulsing as ifÖ

Ayaka: As if what

Jeff: we have a problem

Ayaka: what problem

Jeff: look behind you


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